OK, Mzbitca, I'm going there…

Yes, there.

 

And if I catch up, we will have something to discuss later!

About Ouyang Dan

otherwise known as Brandann R. Hill-Mann. a Pagan, Native American, (formerly) single mother, social justice activist, invisibly disabled, US Navy Veteran, from Almost Canada, Michigan, currently living in the Republic of Korea on Uncle Sam’s dime.
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0 Responses to OK, Mzbitca, I'm going there…

  1. mzbitca says:

    yay we should cross post on each others pages or something to make this even more epic!

    I won’t be able to read anymore til tomorrow so you should have plenty of time to catch up

  2. Ouyang Dan says:

    I am about 55 pages in. This girl has NO self esteem! Could she cut herself down (or that Mike kid) any more? She is about as catty in her head as I imagined the Mean Girls in high school were.

    My chief complaint so far is that the writing is overly descriptive. In a very Steinbeck way…only w/o the skill. It has all the wordiness I hate about Steinbeck (“I put on my blue sweater and denim pants” when “I got dressed” would have sufficed), but w/o it actually being interesting. The beginning isn’t that bad…like you said.

    But their first encounters are very cat and mouse…and why does every man seem to discredit her brain automatically?

    I like the cross posting idea. We are boldly going where feminist minded pop culture addicts have not dared go before!

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